tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6075797781212778962.post3978082481873480824..comments2024-02-13T00:27:23.908-08:00Comments on A poetess blog: ranjanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13757715929350922698noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6075797781212778962.post-15342686984114729202010-02-10T22:29:53.325-08:002010-02-10T22:29:53.325-08:00shabd dar shabd apse milne ki iksha badh jati hai,...shabd dar shabd apse milne ki iksha badh jati hai,kya isi tarah dosti ki manzil tay ki jati hai.<br /><br />no doubt aap main bahut kuch hai aur itna kuch hai ke aap yadi sahitya main technically strong hote jayenge to vo din door nahin jab ap ki rachnayen logon nason main lahoo bankar daudengi,kyunki apki rachnayon main ek FEEL hai.<br /><br />UMEED KARTA HOON KE AAP SE EK DIN MULAQAT HO,<br />SHAYAD JINDAGI KO NAYE NAZARIYE SE DEKHNE KI BAAT HO.SHAKTI PRAJAPATIhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04989212303337304920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6075797781212778962.post-20173143601401639062010-01-24T05:04:26.308-08:002010-01-24T05:04:26.308-08:00पुरानी सड़क पर बहुत दूर भागे...
निकलते गए और लोगो स...पुरानी सड़क पर बहुत दूर भागे...<br />निकलते गए और लोगो से आगे...<br />मगर गौर से जब निगाहें गड़ाई..<br />नए से थे चेहरे, नए थे लबादे.<br /><br />खूबसूरत पंक्तियाँ हैं. आज की दुनिया का सच है.हितेष https://www.blogger.com/profile/10641999988239901845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6075797781212778962.post-54729542209158336152010-01-24T01:01:28.653-08:002010-01-24T01:01:28.653-08:00गुंधे एक दूजे में ख्वाहिश के धागे...
है कुछ ख्वाब ...गुंधे एक दूजे में ख्वाहिश के धागे...<br />है कुछ ख्वाब जिंदा तो कुछ थे अभागे...<br /><br />ख्वाब जो पूरे हो जाते हैं जिंदा रहता हैं ....... नही तो आभागे होते हैं ....... बहुत अच्छी रचना ....दिगम्बर नासवाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11793607017463281505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6075797781212778962.post-84393113627338185022010-01-23T07:38:39.006-08:002010-01-23T07:38:39.006-08:00Mujhe lagata hai aapki aaz ki nai poem ki heading ...Mujhe lagata hai aapki aaz ki nai poem ki heading "Khare Log" hona chahiye. Aaz kal to cheating ka jamana, saaf suthare log badi muskil se milate hai, cheater hi jyada pasand kiye jate hai, fir bhi aapka prayas sarahniya hai...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08900408003925880705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6075797781212778962.post-32180761618405457302010-01-23T07:35:59.790-08:002010-01-23T07:35:59.790-08:00Mujhe lagata hai aapki aaz ki nai poem ki heading ...Mujhe lagata hai aapki aaz ki nai poem ki heading "Khare Log" hona chahiye. Aaz kal to cheating ka jamana, saaf suthare log badi muskil se milate hai, cheater hi jyada pasand kiye jate hai, fir bhi aapka prayas sarahniya hai...pramodkumarnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6075797781212778962.post-83835939393488462182010-01-23T03:01:47.953-08:002010-01-23T03:01:47.953-08:00वाह जी बहुत अच्छा लिखा है आपने. आभार.वाह जी बहुत अच्छा लिखा है आपने. आभार.Kajal Kumar's Cartoons काजल कुमार के कार्टूनhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12838561353574058176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6075797781212778962.post-35335754048645624712010-01-23T01:50:19.544-08:002010-01-23T01:50:19.544-08:00बेहद उम्दा अभिव्यक्ति लगी, बधाई ।बेहद उम्दा अभिव्यक्ति लगी, बधाई ।Mithilesh dubeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14946039933092627903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6075797781212778962.post-55218919452321146882010-01-23T01:38:01.144-08:002010-01-23T01:38:01.144-08:00सपनों में उड़ने की ये कोशिश सफल हो सकती है।सपनों में उड़ने की ये कोशिश सफल हो सकती है।Rajeyshahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01568866646080185697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6075797781212778962.post-662537301968799612010-01-23T01:22:47.967-08:002010-01-23T01:22:47.967-08:00sunder bhavnae darshatee kavita !sunder bhavnae darshatee kavita !Apanatvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07788229863280826201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6075797781212778962.post-50093567650751302372010-01-23T01:08:07.142-08:002010-01-23T01:08:07.142-08:00bahut behtreen rachna hrdy ki antrvyatha ko kahti ...bahut behtreen rachna hrdy ki antrvyatha ko kahti hui <br />saadar <br />praveen pathik <br />9971969084प्रवीण शुक्ल (प्रार्थी)https://www.blogger.com/profile/01003828983693551057noreply@blogger.com